Storyboard Breakdowns

Title The Fallen Brother

Logline ….already written

Opening Aram is fighting a horde of demons

Inciting moment After finishing the horde he sees his brother after countless millenias

Debate He’s taken aback by the sight of his brother, he doesn’t know what to do.

Point of no return His brother speaks and says to find him if he dares before disappearing

First challenge Finding information on his brother (montage on his escapades through various supernatural factions)

Escalation in Action He finds a group of people who may know Zakar’s whereabouts but they say Zakar has paid them to kill anyone who asks about him.

Midpoint He is a fair bit away from the location he beat out of the faction

Point of no return He enters the entrance to the lair

Bad stuff closes in Smoke creatures appear surrounding him.

All is lost He appears to be outnumbered and out of his depth

Fresh idea He must finish what he started gaining new strength to finish the smoke creatures.

Finale He fights his brother that leads to the two of them having a stand off single stroke battle.

Final image The two of them fall down to their knees before Zakar falls down on his stomach and Aram is left crying for killing his brother but knowing it was for the greater good.

My original piece but I thought that the drawing required may or may not be too much with the planned action sequences in my head.

Name

Lenar Viernes

Title

Cupcake a la Noir

Logline

The cupcake of Tyler’s best friend is eaten and sets out to find the culprit to this unjust crime.

Opening             

Tyler is sitting on a chair narrating what has occurred.

Inciting moment

(Narration/Flashback) The young boy comes to him to ask as who ate his cupcake.

Debate                 

Plot point one

He goes to Sneaky Jim, the one who knows everything and everyone.

First challenge

Trying to get information/confession

Escalation in Action

Jim able to hide to his hiding spots.

Midpoint

Tyler goes to the scene of the crime and rethinks stuff

Point of no return

He suspects Connor’s twin sister, Cassidy,

Bad stuff closes in

He is framed by Cassidy and Sneaky Jim

All is lost

He gets sent to the principal’s office.

Fresh idea

He rethinks everything, especially Cass and Jim’s working together.

Finale

Cassidy and Jim tell him how they concocted their plan.

Final image

Tyler’s POV of Cass and Jim walking away, Cass looking back, winking at him.

My alternate script with a (hopefully) film noir-esque storyline.